Commenting

Hi it is me again and I am commenting on people’s blogs. I will show and tell you what a good comment is. It is when you give a complement and suggest and not command. You do not tell that they are bad at blogging it would be mean and that is not a good comment. These are good comments.

number 1

Hi Gabriel

if I liked swimming I would be doing the same thing but I do not like sports so you know. It would please me if you added more and comment me.

sincerely Oliver online

number 2

Hi Jabari,

I like the game picture that you posted. I have the exact game. Please countinue the good work and please comment me I would very much like that.

Sincerely,

Oliver online

https://oliveronlinep.edublogs.org/

number 3

Hi Maia

I like that you put only animals as pictures. It makes me wonder do you like animals. Can you please comment on my blog and answer me if you want to.

sincerely, Oliver online

That is what a good comment is.

A Slimy Lagoon Creature

When Simon went to a castle he saw Harry Potter by magic. Simon thought it was a dream because he knew that Harry was in another universe. Harry said to run because the ground was starting to shake.

Then a slimy lagoon creature came out of the ground and grabbed Simon and Harry with its front paws and ran away with them. He dragged them into a dark cave with bats trying to bite their necks.

When Simon woke up, they were about to be poisoned! He saw a cauldron full of poison. The creature looked like it was hungry, so Simon thought he was about to eat them.

The creature  was immune to poison. The creature noticed that Simon and Harry woke up and he said`that the poison was meant for them.

 But then a good magician named Nomis stopped him by shooting a lazer out of his wand . He looked awesome he had a diamond robe to protect himself he did not have a beard his wand was shaped like a diamond sword.

They asked him what was that and he said it was a platypus, they were in shock. After an hour they realize it is pizza for supper.

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My Bird Pika

Hi it’s me again it has been a long time. Today I’m going to talk about my bird that I got for Christmas. he is yellow and his name is Pika. He is a baby budgie. A kind of parakeet. He chirps a lot in his cage but not when he is out of his cage. He is more my brother because he asked one a few years ago but he got three fake ones. But this year I’m the one who found out first. so he is equally mine because I found out for my brother.

 

When we get him out of his cage one of are cats are in the entrance and the other with us because the one in the entrance tries to eat him. My two dogs are the same thing they try to eat him so they are in the entrance as well and no they do not try to eat the cat. The bird tries to sewer side on the other cat that does not try to eat him. Once my brother had an idea of putting him on a card when I was playing headbands. That’s all for today see you later bye.

What I Feel Being Special Like Harry Potter

oliverWe are reading Harry Potter and he is at his school and his famous. For me it would be cool because I would be famous. But Harry Potter thinks its annoying because people are whispering about him.

I feel special like Harry Potter because I have nervous tics. They are extremely rare 1 in 100 people have it. I also have creepy flexibility. like I can put my leg on my head and I can walk in a weird position. I am a very unique person in my school! thats all for today bye. P.s next time dragonbreath.

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